Wednesday, 2 February 2011

Welcome to the Fun House

I like this idea, but the quality of the writing is poor, the idea is sketchy at best and it all just seems... forced. I feel this could be going better.

The Fun House always has five members. Never more, never fewer,” [Natasha] explained. “We are... facilitators... chosen to guide and caress the uninitiated with our charm and our passion.” She looked into her coffee and smiled wickedly. “There are many types of lovers. Members of the Fun House are chosen to be all and none.”


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